Sometimes I feel like the world is an unlit candle, watching my lighter’s drama.
I was taught the word is light, I guess grade school didn’t teach us to speak in brighter grammar
Cos these twilight thoughts often leave my tongue twisted.
Who ever said talk is cheap, never valued the tongue he was gifted.
Still, light has never met a darkness it could not chase.
And even when words are too heavy for lips to lift, I can still hum amazing Grace.
Until I can flip my can’ts to can dos.
Until I can speak Sparks to these candles.
Ini Brown
©2021
It’s a nice poem but I feel like the theme got buried under all the word play, would have liked to see you stick with the light/ candle theme through out all the verses. Some limes just seem drawn from anywhere
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Whoever said talk is cheap, never valued the tongue he was gifted. 😌
Lovely Piece
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